Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/October 14, 2024
Tweak?
[edit]Hi SchroCat, I'm wondering about the tense in the opening sentence. Might be just me but
"Stephen Waldorf was a 26-year-old man who was shot and injured in 1983" sounds like he is now deceased?
Stephen Waldorf, was a 26-year-old man who was shot and injured in 1983?
No worries if you don't agree, just a suggestion. JennyOz (talk) 01:34, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Jenny, Yep - good call. As it's now locked, I've asked an admin to do the deed for me. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 08:19, 13 October 2024 (UTC)