Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Ferrari FF/archive1

Ferrari FF

Featured article candidates/Ferrari FF/archive1

Nominator(s): 750 h+ 02:19, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about a stunning station wagon built by the prominent Italian automaker Ferrari. This article recently underwent a good article review by Arconning for which I am very grateful. At 1,300 words long it is the second-shortest article I've brought here, after the Lagonda Taraf. Thanks for all reviews received, and they will be responded to in a timely manner. Best, 750 h+ 02:19, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image review - pass

Hi 750h+, happy to do the image review. The article contains the following images:

The first three are own works published under CC BY-SA 3.0, the last one is from Flickr published under CC BY 2.0. All images are relevant to the article and placed in appropriate locations. They all have alt texts and the images in the body of the article have captions. I think the caption of "2013_Ferrari_FF,_Blu_TdF,_rear_left.jpg" should name the model to avoid confusion since we also have images of other models. Otherwise, I didn't spot any issues. Phlsph7 (talk) 09:04, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done, thanks for the review Phlsph! 750 h+ 09:14, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Phlsph7 (talk) 11:43, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

SC

Putting down a marker for now. - SchroCat (talk) 12:56, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

" Under the direction of Lowie Vermeersch—former Design Director at Pininfarina—and Flavio Manzoni, work on the shooting brake after the creation of the Pininfarina Sintesi, a concept car." I'm struggling to understand this sentence.
"wanted the car developed": which car? The FF or the Pininfarina?
"at the facility in" "their facility"?
"manage airflow over and around its body efficiently" might work a shade better as "manage airflow efficiently over and around its body"
"helping minimize lift and drag": "minimize" should be "minimise"
The review section is a bit repetitive in the formatting, with 'John Smith of The Paper said...' appearing for every review – a little variety in the structure would be beneficial

It's quite short for a Ferrari than was produced for five years, but I guess you've squeezed every drop out of every source you can. That's my lot on the comments. - SchroCat (talk) 05:41, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done, thanks for the review SC (also five years of production in the car industry, believe it or not, isn't very long [but that may depend on model). 750 h+ 09:17, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support All good from me. - SchroCat (talk) 10:07, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source review: Pass

I'll pick up this while I'm here too. - SchroCat (talk) 05:11, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bunker, Ted (1 August 2024) isn't used in the article and should be removed
"Quick Spin" should be "Quick spin" for consistent capitalisation
"Geneva Auto Show" to "Geneva auto show" for the same reason (Its proper name is the Geneva International Motor Show, so 'auto show' is used descriptively here
It's worth considering archiving all the weblinks (I think there's a bot or script that can help, but I don't know what it is). Not part of the review, just a suggestion. - SchroCat (talk) 05:21, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SchroCat: all done, except for the archiving (doesn't seem like IABot is working). Much thanks for the reviews! 750 h+ 09:54, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Pass of the source review. - SchroCat (talk) 10:07, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! Seems like IABot worked. 750 h+ 10:07, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]