Talk:Windows 11, version 24H2

Microsoft Windows: Computing High‑importance

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Microsoft Mid‑importance

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Key Features section: first person, weird tone

I noticed that the Key Features section has weird non-neutral tone and uses first person language in a couple places. I can't find any sources for the exact language used, which makes me think it might be GenAI (or just written by someone with a confused idea of how wikipedia works).

I feel like it needs a rewrite to fix these issues. Yrfriendjkap (talk) 14:39, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On further review, it appears to be a slight reword of (current) reference 12: [1] Yrfriendjkap (talk) 14:44, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]