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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Patrick J. Ryan (chaplain)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Darth Stabro (talk · contribs) 04:06, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: HistoryTheorist (talk · contribs) 00:57, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Hey, I am interested in reviewing this article. If you are able, I would like to be able to access the paywalled sources, but I understand if you can't give me access. Will start reviewing soon. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 00:57, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If you send me your email address via the Wikipedia email form, I can send you PDFs of the relevant pages. ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 01:19, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Great! Thanks! I will most likely send you substantive comments over the weekend. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 01:35, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Update: Real life has not given me much opportunities to review in earnest, I'm hoping to have comments by the end of this week. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 03:07, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No worries! I totally understand! ~Darth StabroTalk/Contribs 03:26, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Initial comments

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  • You might want to leave an in-line citation for Ryan's retirement date.