Talk:Mindfulness and technology

CCT 745: Reflection Paper Revisions

1. Early studies of mindfulness focused on health issues related to psychosomatic and psychiatric disorders[7], "ScienceDirect". www.sciencedirect.com. Retrieved 2019-02-12.

2. while later studies of mindfulness explore the business sector, showing an increase in creativity and a decrease in burnout.[8] Moldoveanu, Mihnea; Langer, Ellen J. (2000-01-01). "The Construct of Mindfulness". Journal of Social Issues. 56 (1): 1–9. doi:10.1111/0022-4537.00148. ISSN 1540-4560.

3. Studies on the relationship between mindfulness and technology are fairly new with some of the most recent research highlighting the importance the practice plays in safety.[9] Moldoveanu, Mihnea; Langer, Ellen J. (2000-01-01). "The Construct of Mindfulness". Journal of Social Issues. 56 (1): 1–9. doi:10.1111/0022-4537.00148. ISSN 1540-4560.

Haypon (talk) 17:06, 12 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Request for Review of Recent Edits

Hello, I recently made several edits to the "Mindfulness and Technology" article to improve clarity, coherence, and adherence to Wikipedia guidelines. Below are the changes I made:

1. Merged "Software" and "Meditation" sections for coherence and removed redundancies.

2. Expanded the "Neurofeedback" section with details on its mechanism and integration with mindfulness, supported by recent studies.

3. Removed the Fullmind reference, neutralized language, and clarified content for relevance and readability.

4. Removed opinionated language to ensure statements are backed by reliable sources and maintain a neutral tone.

5. Corrected heading formatting.

6. Split the neurofeedback section for better structure.

7. Removed an external link to Yours App to adhere to Wikipedia’s guidelines against external links.

Could a moderator please review these changes for approval? Thank you for your time and assistance. Ynwaps (talk) 15:39, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]