Talk:Liberty 5-3000/GA1
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Nominator: Hydrangeans (talk · contribs) 21:07, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 01:12, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I am going to review this article as part of the October GA backlog drive. I should be done within a week. Kimikel (talk) 01:12, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Hydrangeans: Please see below my initial review of this article. I admit there is very little to address, this is a very well-written article. If you have any questions or concerns regarding my suggestions please let me know. Thank you. Kimikel (talk) 02:27, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
Well-written
[edit]Very little to nitpick here.
- "starts wanting" > wants
- "Canadian rock band Rush's 1976 "2112" has lyrics reminiscent of Rand's Anthem, a resemblance lyricist Neil Peart described as having happened accidentally.[56] However, Liberty 5-3000 is "decidedly absent" from the song, musicologist Durrell Bowman explains.[57]" > A song not having any reference to the subject of the article doesn't merit mention; I believe it would be better to remove this paragraph entirely.
Verifiable
[edit]- Only one of the publishers is wikilinked in the sources; it'd be nice if they all were for consistency's sake
Spot check
[edit]Broad
[edit]- Broad in its coverage
Neutral
[edit]- Neutral
Illustrated
[edit]- Images are properly tagged and contribute to article
Stable
[edit]- Stable