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What is POV?

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Since January 2008, this article has had a tag asking for citations for verification. I tried to make it halfway decent, but it gets reverted by User:Anthony Appleyard who has asked "Which parts are POV?". Without cites from independent sources, the following claims are POV/advertisement/unsubstantiated -

  1. "purpose-built reservoir"
  2. in 1957 the MOD "had abandoned the fort"
  3. "an important national commercial diving school"
  4. "got into difficulties"
  5. "severe disagreements among its management"
  6. "had a world-wide reputation"
  7. "owners obtained a court order for possession and changed the locks and evicted the remaining diving etc firms trading there"
  8. "Greg Dyke...... owned Fort Bovisand and had plans to set up a new business there" (no mention of this in his own article)

etc. The article had a lot of irrelevant fluff too, which I have removed.

Info/dates regarding the guns need cites too. Kaiwhakahaere (talk) 21:30, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]