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GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This shouldn't take very long! --K. Peake 07:52, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Remove the word studios after Crescent Moon in the infobox and where is this sourced?
  • Add a comma after second studio album
  • Make the release sentence the second of the lead instead
  • "It is a flamenco pop ballad in which Ponce makes a" → "A flamenco pop ballad, it features Ponce making a"
  • Wikilink lead single
  • "on August 16, 1999 by" → "on August 16, 1999, by"
  • "It was met with positive reactions from music critics who praised the song's" → "The song received positive reactions from music critics, who praised its"
  • "of the track was released in Brazil and features Brazilian singer" → "of it was released in Brazil and features" since the introduction is not needed for the lead

Background and composition

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  • "album, Todo lo Que Soy, which was released in September 21, 1999." → "album Todo lo Que Soy, which was issued on September 21."
  • "for the project such as" → "for the project, such as"
  • "two of the album's track including" → "two of the album's tracks, including"
  • [9] should solely be at the end of the sentence per WP:OVERCITE

Promotion and reception

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  • "as released as the album's lead single" → "was released as the album's lead single" with the wikilink
  • "in Miami, Florida September 28." → "in Miami, Florida, on September 28."
  • "was filmed in at" → "was filmed at"
  • "dancing in an club" → "dancing in a club"
  • Directly mention that the single was released only in Brazil
  • "number one in Brazil according" → "number one in Brazil, according"
  • "found it to be" → "found "Escúchame" to be"
  • Chicago Sun TimesChicago Sun-Times with the wikilink
  • "vocals as it works" → "vocals, as it works"
  • "and hand claps."" → "and hand claps"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "making it his third" → "making it Ponce's third"

Formats and track listings

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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