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Jim and Pam

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Sorry Jim and Pam aren't getting together in this episode, but I will tell you that they will come forth with there love sone. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 75.46.139.182 (talk) 20:59, 26 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]

Watch Out For Snakes

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this wouldn't happen to be a reference to the B Movie Eegah would it? They made fun of it (and particularly the phrase "watch out for snakes!") in MST3K. Maybe add this to the Notes section--74.88.164.181 (talk) 06:41, 5 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Beach Games/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 14:42, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Lede: I would link names and add actors to the various characters  Done
  • Lede: "Episode scenes involved various cast members wearing sumo outfits" This seems just a tad bit out of place, maybe reword the sentence to make it seem more important  Done
  • Lede: "and many gave the sumo suit scenes as particular highlights" -> "and many cited the sumo suit scenes as particular highlights"  Done
  • Synopsis: I would add actors after the characters  Done
  • Synopsis: "won't" watch conteractions  Done
  • Synopsis: "citing as one example that almost no one attended her art show" -> "citing the fact that almost no one attended her art show"  Done
  • Production: Maybe explain the cold opening, I can't remember off the top of my head what it is, so that would help the readers
  • Production: "…the dour office, "the bleakest…" the comma after office should be a colon  Done
  • Production: Move the refs [1][3] after Hansen Dam to the end of the sentence  Done
  • Production: "And at night, they had heaters everywhere…" -> "At night, the production crew set up heaters everywhere…"  Done
  • Production: "Actress Kate Flannery also found the days of filming to be in "hot" temperatures…" -> "Actress Kate Flannery later said that the days of filming were extremely "hot"…"  Done
  • Production: The section about spitting out after ingesting. Did they really do it after ingesting? As in barfing? Or did they spit them out after putting them in their mouths?  Done
  • Production: in this section the pronoun 'they' is used quite frequently. Who are 'they'?  Done
  • Production: I would place a cite after every quotation  Done
  • Cultural References: "sang" -> "sings". Also, do they sing the Friends theme song? I don't remember that…
  • I believe their rendition of the song didn't make it into the episode. I have removed it for clarity's sake. Ruby 2010/2013
  • Reception: Again, I'd add cites for every quotation  Done

That's all. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 02:00, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good! Passing.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:47, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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