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Have added material from the main East Africa article and Northern Front but need to re-edit to rm duplication.Keith-264 (talk) 21:09, 17 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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I agree with Gog the Mild that the article is B class. However, the following issues need attention. Under British plans section Wavell is used; under Italian capture of Kassala, Platt is used; under Analysis Duke of Aosta is used. Platt, Wavell and Duke of Aosta need links and an explanation who they are. A Beresford-Peirse link is in the infobox but the article does not make it clear what his role was in the battle. Djmaschek (talk) 16:13, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Done; your fresh pair of eyes is most welcome. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 17:20, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I removed "Commonwealth" because Sudan and India weren't in it but will have to think again if I can manage an air operations section from Orpen. Keith-264 (talk) 17:21, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]