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Plot and other possible improvements

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I've improved the plot description, but that ended up making it even longer, without improving the rest of the article as indicated. I'm not a regular Wiki user, so I want to leave this note here in case I happily forget all about it after today. The article could probably be further improved by making the Plot section shorter (without messing up the actual plot, please - the original description was rather confusing, and inaccurate on some counts, including Czenglish mistakes like "hound" for a little fluffy dog), and introducing other info. 90.178.202.206 (talk) 08:19, 8 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]