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===[[Articlename]]===

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No request by an unregistered editor will be accepted unless the IP has done significant work on the article. Drive-by IP requests already on the list may be declined by any editor.
The average waiting time is two or so months. Please be patient and feel free to improve your requested article while you wait.
If you plan to nominate the article for good article, A-class or featured article status, please wait until the copy edit is complete before nominating it.
Having your article copy edited by our team does not guarantee that the prose will be considered acceptable during any of the above reviews.
You may have up to two open requests at any one time. This is enforced so that every request can have a fair chance of being fulfilled within a reasonable period.

Requests may be declined if the article is:

in the Draft or User namespaces, or is awaiting review at Wikipedia:Articles for creation;
unstable, undergoing rapid development, the venue for an ongoing edit war, or otherwise not yet suitable for copy editing.

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Once you have accepted a request, it may be helpful to add a section to the article's Talk page explaining that you will be copy-editing the article and that other editors are welcome to post questions and comments for you while you are doing so. Remember to add another note when you are done.
Please ensure that you are familiar with the Wikipedia Manual of Style and the expectations for editing for the GOCE outlined in our Step by Step guide. The simplified Manual of Style is here. A number of national varieties of English are present throughout the encyclopedia, and no one variety is preferred. Keep spelling and date formatting consistent within an article.
When you accept a request, place an indented {{Working}} template immediately beneath the request and sign your post with four tildes (~~~~) so other copy editors know not to accept it.
Accept only one request at a time.
Articles that are potential Featured Article candidates should be handled by experienced editors.
If you have accepted a request but cannot fulfill it for any reason, please amend it with either:
- a note of the sections you have completed so someone else can complete the copy edit, or;
- a suitable template: {{Not done}}, {{Partly done}}, or Abandoned (not a template!). Please make a good-faith effort to complete a copyedit; excessive use of the "Partly done" template does little (or nothing) to reduce the backlog.
- If the article is unstable, experiencing rapid development, an ongoing edit war or apparent ownership issues, open a discussion on Requests talk to inform project coordinators.
- Acceptances that appear to have been abandoned will be checked after a reasonable period, usually one week after the timestamp. In cases of complete inactivity we will ask for an update on your talk page. If no response is received within one further week, the {{Working}} template will be removed so other editors may complete the copy edit.
When you have completed a request, add the template {{Done}} below the request and sign your post with four tildes (~~~~) and a bot will archive it in about 24 hours. In limited circumstances (breakdowns etc.), you can add the details of the request to the archive page then remove the request here by blanking the subsection. Do not delete the original request without archiving it.
Please consider adding the templates {{GOCE|user={{subst:REVISIONUSER}}|date={{subst:date}}}} on the talk page of articles you have copy edited and {{GOCEtb|article=Insert article name|sign=~~~~}} to the talk page of the requester.

Instructions for coordinators

Stale requests marked as "Working": Acceptances that appear to have been abandoned should be checked for activity after a reasonable period, usually one week after the timestamp. In cases of complete inactivity, a coordinator should ask for an update on the copy editor's talk page. Write "Asked X for update on talk page" below the "Working" line on the Requests page. If no response is received within one further week, the {{Working}} template should be removed so that other editors may complete the copy edit.
Quality control: Articles from the Requests page that are completed by newer editors should be reviewed for quality by a coordinator, time permitting. The top priority is to review articles that are FA candidates; the second priority, GA and DYK candidates.

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June 2024

Brown bear

Same as the user above; I'd like to get this article FA-ready (FAC). Thanks Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 10:09, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I looked over it and fixed a couple small things that I found, but I'd like someone with more experience to look it over before I mark it done. Moritoriko (talk) 05:02, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For FAC prep, I highly recommend WP:PR. dxneo (talk) 20:34, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article needs a copy edit. Just in the lead, I see "long lived", "The pelage ranges from reddish to yellowish-brown, and dark brown to cream in color", "wide 21 to 36 cm (8.3 to 14.2 in) long paws", "brown bears predominately feed on", "it is a solitary animal that only associates when", "just c. 50 bears". Elsewhere in the article, the serial comma is used inconsistently. This should be a fun one for somebody. I'll take it if I have a spare couple of hours, but anyone is welcome to grab it. – Jonesey95 (talk) 20:43, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this. I assume that the errors listed above are: "pelage" is too choice or educated usage for "fur"; "wide" and "long" are confusing; "predominately" should be "predominantly"; "solitary" should be "usually solitary"; and "c." is too cryptic. Let me know what I have missed. Dhtwiki (talk) 00:14, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Also that "long lived" needs hyphenation. I have just made several corrections to the lead. Dhtwiki (talk) 00:43, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working Dhtwiki (talk) 00:14, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Done Dhtwiki (talk) 23:55, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

July 2024

Yugoslav krone

I would like to submit the Yugoslav krone article for GAN. I believe its prose would benefit from a copyedit to fix grammar and improve flow. Thanks. Tomobe03 (talk) 15:06, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working Baffle☿gab 01:41, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done Baffle☿gab 00:10, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2021 Western Kentucky tornado

Needs copy/edited for a GAN in the future. Article has a POTD set as well, meaning it will be featured on the main page in a couple of months. The Weather Event Writer (Talk Page) 14:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Em (restaurant)

Requesting a copy edit for this recently promoted GA. Thank you! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 22:48, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done Baffle☿gab 03:06, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

1974 Speech of Sheikh Mujibur Rahman at the United Nations

Need copyedit for WP:DYK. Mehedi Abedin 11:48, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Selected Ambient Works 85–92

GA reviewer was concerned with the article's prose. lunaeclipse ^(talk) 11:41, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Water (Tyla song)

The article is very detailed, but its prose is kind of slanted towards recent events. It is also cited to few social media sites which I'm having a hard time trimming. Aiming for GAC (GAN) for now, then FAC afterwards. dxneo (talk) 12:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Research on tornadoes in 2024

Really new article which is linked up to several highly viewed articles (including one which has gotten over 1 million views in the last 30 days). Honestly just need a second set of eyes to copy/edit it real quick. Only 36k bytes in size, but with high-viewage potential, it should be grammatically solid and correct. The Weather Event Writer (Talk Page) 21:24, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:20, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Triangular bipyramid

Triangular bipyramid is another article I will take a submit to the GOCE. I have checked the writings in the article, but there is one problem in the section Triangular bipyramid#Related polyhedra. I'm aware that this section might be a problem during the process of GAN. If someone wants to copyedit the whole article, I appreciate it. Many thanks. Note: This article is about mathematics, especially in geometry of polyhedron. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 11:01, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lois & Clark: The New Adventures of Superman season 1

Requesting copy edit on the article Lois & Clark: The New Adventures of Superman season 1. Thank you very much. NeoBatfreak (talk) 20:20, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

August 2024

Pulgasari

I've been fixing up this article by myself lately, but I'm unsure of how to format/write some aspects as it's covering a very distant topic from my usual edits. Hoping I can nominate it for GA (GAN) after this, as it's a North Korean film with a controversial background involving kidnapping and all that, which deserves more attention. Thanks. Eiga-Kevin2 (talk) 05:18, 2 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Allbirds

Hello GCE. My major concerns for this article are whether I am violating notability in the "Reception" section or giving undue depth in its history section since I'd like to eventually get it to GA (GAN) status. Please be ruthless. Ornov Ganguly TALK 13:38, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

YouTube Rewind

Currently a C-class article (honestly would myself probably assess it as Start, even). But just want it to get it to a decent-looking place. Did some work on it right now, but it could certainly use some extra copy editing. Soulbust (talk) 20:37, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Overdrawn at the Memory Bank

Planning on taking this to FAC so I'm thinking a copyedit would be a good first step. GamerPro64 04:02, 11 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Master controversies

The benevolent being who expanded the article doesn't have English grammar as his strong point. Kailash29792 (talk) 14:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fourth Child

For a GAN.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 22:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

...I Care Because You Do

This passed GA-N a few months ago. The article's prose needs some polishing. lunaeclipse ⚧ ^(talk) 13:36, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ted Bundy (film)

Requesting copu edit of the article Ted Bundy (film). Thanks. NeoBatfreak (talk) 19:45, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Umehara ga kimeta

This is a short article about a meme born out of fighting games and video streaming. I am not a very good English speaker, so I would appreciate it if you could correct my English to natural English. 狄の用務員 (talk) 07:04, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I nominated it to DYK. 狄の用務員 (talk) 14:09, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

List of US officials resigned over Biden's support for Israel in Gaza war

Plan to nominate it for DYK. Ghazaalch (talk) 08:11, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deathloop

The article is in need of in-depth copyediting. Thank you! OceanHok (talk) 10:23, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Knives Out

Would like a vetting of the prose for tone and brevity as I prepare for an FAC. Thank you in advanced! DAP 💅 02:43, 20 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wegmans

I think the Stores section of Wegmans can use copyediting because I do think it looks more like a timeline. I think this section can also use copyediting for a major cleanup to the section and I also think it can be more organized as well. The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 08:02, 21 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Buangkok MRT station

I plan to bring this to FAC. However, from previous comments about the FAC nom, the article needs further clarity. I appreciate if anyone can give a look through, especially reorganising the details of the artwork section. ZKang123 (talk) 01:42, 25 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jake Leschyshyn

I've been working on this article, but I think this one can use copyediting. The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 03:13, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edward I of England

This is currently at FAR but changes have received little feedback. These sections:

are either new or substantially rewritten. A copy edit of these parts would be very welcome; it is not necessary to copy edit the whole article. Jim Killock (talk) 12:36, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie

Prepared for a possible FA review (FAC).Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 06:34, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

1964 New York World's Fair

This page was promoted to Good Article status recently, but I'd like to nominate it for FAC. I would greatly appreciate a copyedit in case there were any issues I missed. Thanks in advance. – Epicgenius (talk) 14:06, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ivo Frank

I would like to submit the Ivo Frank for a GAN and I believe a copyedit would improve article's prose. Thanks! Tomobe03 (talk) 16:35, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

September 2024

80's Ladies

Wanted to improve the writing for this article before it gets re-nominated into the Good Article Nomination (GAN). This article was nominated before but did not pass due to errors in grammar and wording that were not well written at that time. I finished fixing those issues brought up by the reviewer, but I still believe some prose and grammar checks need to be made. Rephrasing is done well and accurately. HereIGoAgain (talk) 09:57, 1 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Partly done I have only done until before the "Music and lyrics" section. Mox Eden (talk) 11:53, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Infostealer

For a potential future FA nom (FAC). Sohom (talk) 15:34, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2024 Salvadoran general election

Article was previously copyedited in March 2023, but a lot has changed since then and I would like another copyedit before a future GAN. Mainly looking for prose and MOS. PizzaKing13 (¡Hablame!) 🍕👑 21:17, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

SS United States

Completely rewrote article over the past few months, and am currently working for an ACR as the article view count has spiked dramatically due to it being in national news. I'd appreciate another pair of eyes looking the article over for grammar issues and flow.

Best, GGOTCC (talk) 19:08, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Palaeotherium

Article is currently sitting at GAN, and the reviewer suggested that I take this to the Guild of Copy Editors before we continue the review. Fossil mammals rarely get attention on Wikipedia, and Palaeotherium in particular has a very old research history plus extensive anatomical coverage that has never been well-translated to most non-expert readers. As a result, it's a bit tricky to make easy to read and fully comprehensive at the same time. Additionally, it may be filled with some grammatical errors. If anyone could help to copyedit the article, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:38, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The Hours (novel)

Should be fairly straightforward. Seems like most of the article is just a copied edit summary. Copyedit will involve deleting most of the plot summary. Catalyzzt (talk) 13:12, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Shaparak Khorsandi

Potential FAC, so I'd be happy to receive any general suggestions for improvement, alongside the copy edit. Thank you. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:00, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kyo Kusanagi

This is an old GA I made in the past and expanded it with real world information while tonning down the in-universe info. I don't plan to make it FA but I believe its prose needs some touching.Tintor2 (talk) 23:12, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Me at the zoo

Failed FAC. Needs restructuring + grammatical fixes. Post-copyedit feedback is appreciated. Thanks, TWOrantula^TM (enter the web) 03:24, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Magic: The Gathering rules

The article went through a major cleanup & restructuring after its 4th AfD (I participated in the article rewrite). It then failed as a GAN with the only reviewer saying: The article needs a pretty major copyedit to be written readable for someone not already completely familiar with the game. Any help would be appreciated! Sariel Xilo (talk) 16:52, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tom Clancy's The Division 2

The article is in need of in-depth copyediting. Thank you! OceanHok (talk) 15:02, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kanifing

(DYK) I nominated Kanifing for a DYK, and the reviewer noted that the article may have issues with close paraphrasing. The reviewer suggested I take it here so others can help fix these issues. (Pinging the reviewer, Chipmunkdavis.) — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 16:20, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On hold; hi @Vigilantcosmicpenguin:, copyright problems should be dealt with before a copy-edit takes place. If only part of the article is closely paraphrased, please identify the (sub-)section(s) using {{Close paraphrasing}} so a copy-editor knows where to work. If text is close enough to the original to be a copyright violation, it should be removed and the revisions deleted via {{Copyvio-revdel}}. Discuss at REQ talk. Baffle☿gab 20:20, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging Chipmunkdavis again since they are the one who alerted me of the close paraphrasing issues. CMD, could you add the tags in the relevant sections? I want to make sure the article is tagged accurately. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 21:47, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your note, Vigilantcosmicpenguin, my concerns have now been dealt with and I've removed my hold notice. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 03:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Garou: Mark of the Wolves

Potential for GA (GAN).Tintor2 (talk) 22:27, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Guna Caves rescue

Rewrite per grammar rules. Remove tag at top when done. DareshMohan (talk) 03:56, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

MidCity SmashedBurger

Requesting a copy edit for this relatively short and recently promoted GA. Thanks in advance! --Another Believer _(Talk) 15:21, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bedok MRT station

I would like it to be a GAN and I think its biggest problem might be its grammar and wording. The article isn't long IMO. Thanks! Please ping me so that I get notified of your response. Imbluey2 02:01, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hindu American Foundation

For a probable GAN. The article is not very long. Note that it is important to stick to the sources; if you have any queries while copy editing, please contact me at my t/p. TrangaBellam (talk) 08:10, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Diesel exhaust

Tagged as needing copyedit. Important because it is so bad for health. Chidgk1 (talk) 18:24, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Opawa

A potential second GA nomination. I would appreciate some help to copyedit the article. Thanks. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 04:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Forests in Turkey

Failed GAN, partly because needs copyedit. I hope to nominate it again later this year. If you spot any other problems please tag them with “cn”, “clarify” etc. If you don’t understand a sentence please let me know, because I think we need to assume a typical reader has very little previous knowledge of the subject. Please could you make the article “flow” better, as I think I am weak on that. Chidgk1 (talk) 07:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

United States presidential elections in Oklahoma

United States presidential elections in Oklahoma. During its FLC another user noted prose issues. I felt that it was fine and was hoping for a copy edit to fix these issues Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 20:28, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

October 2024

Vaanam

Potential GA (GAN). Fix grammar. DareshMohan (talk) 09:57, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Legends of Tomorrow season 3

Failed GAN working to get this up to GA. This is my second request I'm just getting into the que ASAP. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:36, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Flying saucer

Reworked the article and will nominate at GAN in the future, Rjjⁱⁱⁱ (talk) 00:36, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Battle of Thorgo

This article needs copy-edit for sentence structure and concision as per talk page outcome. Thanks Rahim231 (talk) 12:10, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ambivalence (Neon Genesis Evangelion episode)

For a GAN.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 12:05, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Artist Quamrul Hassan Road

Newly-created article about a street. A short article, needs copyedit. Mehedi Abedin 13:53, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

An Evening with Silk Sonic

For GAN. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:38, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jill Valentine

Old FA undergoes a lot of changes, so It might need to be carefully copyedited I think. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 06:09, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Adrar stadium

I was recommended to submit a request for a copy edit for a stadium article I upgraded from a stub to B Class and a GA review. I would appreciate a peer looking over my work to give some future suggestions. Cltjames (talk) 05:32, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

1918–1920 New York City rent strikes

(PR) Hi! I'm requesting a copyedit for the page 1918–1920 New York City rent strikes to cleanup any grammar I missed, fix tone and create a more cohesive piece overall. Its somewhat of a weak point for me. As the main editor of the page I'm more then happy to answer any questions about the history to clarify any ambiguity in the article or general questions of any kind. Thanks so much! LoomCreek (talk) 19:03, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pennsylvania Turnpike

Pennsylvania Turnpike has gotten massively bloated with excessive info. It also has a lot of one-sentence paragraphs and sections where several sentences in a row begin with "In (year)...". Article was recently delisted from GA due to these concerns. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 18:47, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]