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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:45, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Why is the "starring" part of the infobox purposely written to be empty?
  • Improve the main image's non-free use rationale.
  • "included" → "includes" (MOS:TENSE)
  • "shortly after the platform's launch" – specify per WP:LEAD
  • "Local crew" → "The local crew"
  • "filming crew were" → "filming crew was" (American English)
  • "dialogue and singing was" → "dialogue and singing were"
  • Add a serial comma after "storyboards".
  • "The cast come" → "The cast comes"
  • Add a serial comma after "Josh Gad as Olaf".
  • "lengthy hours" → "long hours"
  • Add a serial comma between "Bobby, Kristen and Jennifer".
  • "The crew discuss" → "The crew discusses"
  • Add a serial comma between "Norway, Finland and Iceland".
  • "Animation supervisor on Anna Hyun Min Lee" - reword
  • Add a hyphen between "half finished".
  • "which approaches" → "that approaches"
  • "decorated by" → "decorated with"
  • "the crew arrive" → "the crew arrives"
  • Add a serial comma between "Buck, Unten and Walters".
  • "afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
  • Sources are archived.
  • Sort categories in alphabetical order.
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:44, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina:,  Done Wingwatchers (talk) 18:59, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]