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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk) 22:55, 9 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lede
  • "...the storm further strengthened into a hurricane before striking central Florida on December 1." - Wikilink "Florida"
  • "On December 5, the system is believed to have dissipated offshore." - Sounds like a personally opinion, like someone said "I believe that the system dissipated on December 5". You should probably revise to something like this: "On December 5, the system was presumed to have dissipated offshore."
  • "Property damage amounted to $3 million, $1 million of which was in Jacksonville." - Add inflation templates to $3 million and $1 million
Meteorological history
  • "The 1925 Florida hurricane was first identified on November 27, 1925 as a tropical depression situated to the southeast of the Yucatán Peninsula, nearly a month after the official end of the hurricane season." - First, erase "1925", since it would be obvious that this system formed in 1925. On the second part of this sentence, I don't think that a hurricane season in 1925 was June 1 - November 30, and BTW, November 27 is actually three days before the official end of hurricane season, and not "nearly a month" later. \
  • In the first paragraph, delink "Cuba" and "landfall", since they are already linked in the lede.
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Summary
Good job, you have either addressed or fix my issues, so therefore, I am passing this article for GA. Congratulations,--12george1 (talk) 22:31, 12 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]